EclipseOfTheMoon

From the Pocket of a Dream

*Limitless*

Only one glance into the mind is not enough to distinguish
the supremacy of a single thought.
Like a bird the thought can fly through the sky
Wet.
Wild.
Limitless.
Wet of all the tears falling from clouds
in the futile craving for something unreal.
Wild of all the spooky screams in its dark night
scared by a cry that could cut the silence in one split second
but then, suddenly disappears into the moment of no return.
When the scream is gone, the thought remains.
The thought.
Nothing more.

***

© Eclipse 2008 – 2011

Thursday Poets Rally Week 39 (March 3-9, 2011)

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18 comments on “*Limitless*

  1. rosemarymonteith
    March 9, 2011

    Vivid, and powerful, yet simple Eclipse

  2. Sue Dreamwalker
    March 8, 2011

    Love this Eclipse … It all begins and ends in thought!…

  3. Elaine Spall
    March 7, 2011

    That’s a very powerful thought. Thank you.

  4. Marlee-I Mystic
    March 7, 2011

    Very vivid! Love the opening lines “Only one glance into the mind is not enough to distinguish
    the supremacy of a single thought.” Kudos!
    Here’s my rally entry- http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/03/05/341/

  5. BUTTERFLIES OF TIME
    March 6, 2011

    loved its profound images .. and the thoughts flying across the sky.. great write

  6. dragonkatet
    March 6, 2011

    Hmmm…I loved that first line! So true. And the thought that remains will be replaced by another thought, and another…and so on. I liked the surreal feel of this. Well written. 🙂

  7. ” The thought, nothing more” The scream reaches, we reach, we soar…. till but “the thought, and nothing more”

    • eclipseofthemoon
      March 5, 2011

      Thank you very much for reading and for the link, tasithoughts….

  8. Paulo Guimaraes
    March 4, 2011

    Excellent, I believe what awaits us in death is to remain with the self in thought and darkness. Maybe call it a form of Schizophrenia. This is one thought i wrestle with in my weird mind,lol. Great poem!

  9. Scent of my heart
    March 4, 2011

    Keep these thoughts, very well expressed in words! Thanks for linking with Thursday Rally, fine contribution!

    • eclipseofthemoon
      March 5, 2011

      Thank you very much for reading and your kind comment, Scent of my heart…. 🙂

  10. fiveloaf
    March 4, 2011

    this ia real nice and i love it! here’s my wk 39.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/17/regret/

  11. Mihir Vatsa
    March 4, 2011

    Really, really nice. Good work. 🙂

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