*Limitless*

Only one glance into the mind is not enough to distinguish
the supremacy of a single thought.
Like a bird the thought can fly through the sky
Wet.
Wild.
Limitless.
Wet of all the tears falling from clouds
in the futile craving for something unreal.
Wild of all the spooky screams in its dark night
scared by a cry that could cut the silence in one split second
but then, suddenly disappears into the moment of no return.
When the scream is gone, the thought remains.
The thought.
Nothing more.

***

© Eclipse 2008 – 2011

Thursday Poets Rally Week 39 (March 3-9, 2011)

~ by Eclipse on March 4, 2011.

18 Responses to “*Limitless*”

  1. Vivid, and powerful, yet simple Eclipse

  2. Love this Eclipse … It all begins and ends in thought!…

  3. That’s a very powerful thought. Thank you.

  4. Very vivid! Love the opening lines “Only one glance into the mind is not enough to distinguish
    the supremacy of a single thought.” Kudos!
    Here’s my rally entry- http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/03/05/341/

  5. loved its profound images .. and the thoughts flying across the sky.. great write

  6. Hmmm…I loved that first line! So true. And the thought that remains will be replaced by another thought, and another…and so on. I liked the surreal feel of this. Well written. 🙂

  7. ” The thought, nothing more” The scream reaches, we reach, we soar…. till but “the thought, and nothing more”

  8. So full of imagery that is powerful.

    JP

    http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/03/02/and-then-came-the-laughter/

  9. Excellent, I believe what awaits us in death is to remain with the self in thought and darkness. Maybe call it a form of Schizophrenia. This is one thought i wrestle with in my weird mind,lol. Great poem!

  10. Keep these thoughts, very well expressed in words! Thanks for linking with Thursday Rally, fine contribution!

  11. this ia real nice and i love it! here’s my wk 39.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/17/regret/

  12. Really, really nice. Good work. 🙂

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