From the Pocket of a Dream

*Will It Be Forever?*

When the door of time opens
with the creaky sound of the past rumours
where will we find us then?
Will we still worry 
confused about the things impossible to change?

When the light starts to penetrate this evil darkness
will it be hard to realize that nothing can harm us any more
that this crimson dawn that comes
is only ours
made for us to be able to breath again
after the death we have been through?

When all the secrets in our hearts come out into the freedom
are we going to accept them and put all the fears behind
never let them come back?

When our eyes finally meet
will it be forever?

© Eclipse 2008 – 2011

Image: Eternal Embrace, Lachaise Cemetery Paris


17 comments on “*Will It Be Forever?*

  1. ladynimue
    March 9, 2011

    This was so well expressed .. Letting go of past only can bring in peace and a new beginning ..

    Excellent !!

    PS : I like your blog header iamge !

  2. Jingle
    March 9, 2011

    have fun, support by visiting a dozen entries starting from the latest one, go backwards, 226, 225, 224, ….214..

    your input is appreciated.

  3. Evelyn
    March 8, 2011

    “with the creaky sound of the past rumours”
    Great line, full of noise.

    • eclipseofthemoon
      March 8, 2011

      Thank you very much for reading Evelyn,
      yes…rumours can be noisy at times… 🙂

  4. fiveloaf
    March 8, 2011

    the questioning makes this very sultry.. thank you for sharing this eclipse.. try my potluck-

  5. adreamygal
    March 8, 2011

    I am beginning to wonder why there are not many comments here , because this poem portrays deep fear and wishes that most of us feel .. You have brought out the emotions wonderfully , indeed blackness and the contradicting light always triggers such questions in our mind .. I loved your poem , its simply amazing ! 🙂

    • eclipseofthemoon
      March 8, 2011

      Thank you very much for your visit, and the comment adreamygal, you are too kind… 🙂

  6. Sue Dreamwalker
    March 8, 2011

    As you know me Eclipse I always put the worlds perceptions into how I perceive your words on this as in others I comment upon.. lol
    To me this spoke not only of lovers, but Mankind as a whole . For when that Door of Time opens will we really see there is no Death, in fact ‘The Death’ is right here in this reality we create for ourselves, and the evil and darkness are here upon our Earth is taking our very breath.. as it suffocates us Along with that of our Earth Mother.
    I hope one day Eclipse we put the Fears to oneside, never to return.. And as we look into the Eyes of our consciousness and our maker, And then We can truly embrace All that we are and all that we have been and ALL that we are to become for ever and ever after..

    • eclipseofthemoon
      March 8, 2011

      Great hope, Dreamwalker….and when you put it that way, you’re right – the words above could speak not only for love…

  7. rosemarymonteith
    March 7, 2011

    Lovely Eclipse really enjoyed this

    March 7, 2011

    will it be forever? nice thoughts hopeful and loving .

  9. Paulo Guimaraes
    March 7, 2011

    In life and death, all hearts will be forever intertwined. Wonderful expression of love, deep felt love.

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