Is that
the right way

To rip
two hearts
yet bonded to each other
through the ages

No other way
to rescue them
but to let them
burn out together

© Eclipse 2008 – 2011

Shared on Jingle Poetry
and March 9: Exploration

~ by Eclipse on March 9, 2011.

20 Responses to “*Exploration*”

  1. We have to learn to take the bad with the good though out life. Wonderful post.

  2. “To rip
    two hearts
    yet bonded to each other
    through the ages”

    Striking depth to these words…outstanding.

    Thank you for sharing this poem.

  3. I love this.. really nicely written..so meaningful 🙂

  4. I was super impressed by your neat penning.. have subscribed to your blog as well..! Glad to connect here through Jingle.. 🙂

  5. walking through love together…. nice!

  6. smart piece..


    thanks for the contribution.

  7. One cannot live without the other sometimes, true happiness as one.

  8. Powerful and sad

  9. Thiswas sad .. even one heart burning for other is such a tragic tale … imagine both !!!

  10. Well….not necessarily, sillyfrogsusan….
    Thank you for stopping by…

  11. This was a perfect description of a toxic love…so many of these out there.

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