From the Pocket of a Dream


Is that
the right way

To rip
two hearts
yet bonded to each other
through the ages

No other way
to rescue them
but to let them
burn out together

© Eclipse 2008 – 2011

Shared on Jingle Poetry
and March 9: Exploration


20 comments on “*Exploration*

  1. 4 ♥ 1 ♥ Love
    March 10, 2011

    We have to learn to take the bad with the good though out life. Wonderful post.

    • eclipseofthemoon
      March 10, 2011

      Thank you very much for stopping by and this kind comment…..

  2. David (1MereMortal)
    March 10, 2011

    “To rip
    two hearts
    yet bonded to each other
    through the ages”

    Striking depth to these words…outstanding.

    Thank you for sharing this poem.

  3. Words Asunder
    March 10, 2011

    I love this.. really nicely meaningful 🙂

  4. Purvi
    March 9, 2011

    I was super impressed by your neat penning.. have subscribed to your blog as well..! Glad to connect here through Jingle.. 🙂

  5. jojo
    March 9, 2011

    walking through love together…. nice!

  6. Jingle
    March 9, 2011

    smart piece..


    thanks for the contribution.

  7. Paulo Guimaraes
    March 9, 2011

    One cannot live without the other sometimes, true happiness as one.

  8. rosemarymonteith
    March 9, 2011

    Powerful and sad

  9. ladynimue
    March 9, 2011

    Thiswas sad .. even one heart burning for other is such a tragic tale … imagine both !!!

    • eclipseofthemoon
      March 10, 2011

      …that’s why they should burn together…. 🙂
      Thanks for the reading and the kind comment, ladynimue

  10. eclipseofthemoon
    March 9, 2011

    Well….not necessarily, sillyfrogsusan….
    Thank you for stopping by…

  11. sillyfrogsusan
    March 9, 2011

    This was a perfect description of a toxic love…so many of these out there.

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