*Forbidden Walls of Illusion*

need you
to promise me
that you’ll wait for me
Because tonight my love
I shall spread my wings
I shall break down
those damn
I’ll find
your window
and storm inside
like a dark wounded bird
in hope to breath in
your comforting
shall stay
there with you
until the dawn until
the daylight start to hurt
by the indescribable
pain bringing me
death again
I have to
back into my chains
But only for the daytime
I will patiently wait
 the very next
to fall
be able
to feel my wings
and fly to you over
and over


© Eclipse 2008 – 2011

Shared on Jingle Poetry
and The daily Post

~ by Eclipse on March 11, 2011.

8 Responses to “*Forbidden Walls of Illusion*”

  1. Greetings!

    Thanks for the lovely contribution to potluck on week 25,

    week 26 is open NOW, we treasury your poetry

    and welcome you in in your personal convenience…old poems are welcome!


    share up to 3 specific poems by linking in 3 times, that way I won’t miss your entry the way I did last time, thanks.

  2. the shape of this poem impress me.
    you rock,


    The Versatile Blogger Award
    I am honored but I feel you are more deserving than I based on the way you paint
    with words and write with hues of color.

  4. It’s interesting to see this point of view. I can’t say fore sure if I agree or not, but it is something I will think about now.

  5. Good, mood-intensive work.

  6. A different direction, a little more abrasive than your normal stuff. Smiled as I read it. My favorite poet!

    Keep up the hard work.

    The Douginator

  7. This is something i wait night for !!
    Almost relatable to my feelings 🙂

    PS : check this link for april month poetry challenge – http://bigtentpoetry.org/2011/03/since-april-is-such-a-circus/

  8. Oooo…so interesting! I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. I hope you consider accepting!


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