From the Pocket of a Dream

*The Secret Chamber*

have painted
my days with flowers
and opened
chamber in the heart
If you look inside
will find
the thousands of love petals
I’d never been
aware of
had waited
for the taste of freedom
longed to be winged
and fly
to rain
all over you
and make it up
for all the dark lonely nights
days of numbness
To amend
everything lost
making you forget all sorrows
making the illusion real
and fly you


© Eclipse 2008 – 2011

Shared on Theme Thursday
and One Shot Wednesday


26 comments on “*The Secret Chamber*

  1. Kavita
    March 21, 2011

    Love may hurt.. but it certainly knows how to heal too! And then we forget all about the hurt… isn’t that awesome!!!
    Beautiful verses… cast into a lovely shape too…

  2. Lucy Westenra
    March 19, 2011

    You have painted my day with a very beautiful, meaningful and surely reproducible-in-print poem of exquisite sensitivity and insight. Thank you! Thank you!

  3. Meryl Jaffe
    March 18, 2011

    Oh, the power of love!

  4. Cynthia
    March 18, 2011

    just beautiful…i found a lump in my throat reading such tenderness

  5. Ankit
    March 18, 2011

    Lovely poem. I so liked the feel.

    I liked the structure also.

  6. Raven
    March 18, 2011

    This poem is beautiful on many levels, including the shape of it. Wonderful description of love.

    • eclipseofthemoon
      March 18, 2011

      Thank you for your visit Raven and for the nice comment
      I’ve visited your site and I’ve discovered a lot of great poetry there…. 🙂

  7. California Girl
    March 18, 2011

    “you have painted my days with flowers”

    a line worthy of a poet. nice.

  8. Kim Nelson
    March 17, 2011

    This is utterly lovely.

  9. dustus
    March 17, 2011

    To open yourself to a beautiful self-knowledge and then to share it—showering it upon another—lovely poem.

  10. ladynimue
    March 17, 2011

    The poetry looked like overlapping petals 🙂
    Lovely lines ..`

  11. brian
    March 17, 2011

    what a gorgeous read…thanks for taking us into that heart to find restoration…glad you joined us at one stop as well…

  12. Paulo Guimaraes
    March 17, 2011

    Very lovely indeed!

  13. honeyhaiku
    March 17, 2011

    Very beautiful indeed. I love the flower analogy here.

  14. Sam373
    March 17, 2011

    Now that is the essence of making love. If it happens to you once, then you have been truly blessed.

  15. dani
    March 17, 2011

    very hopeful. i love how they each help to heal the other. lovely!

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