*The Secret Chamber*
You
have painted
my days with flowers
and opened
another
chamber in the heart
If you look inside
you
will find
the thousands of love petals
I’d never been
aware of
They
had waited
for the taste of freedom
longed to be winged
and fly
just
to rain
all over you
and make it up
for all the dark lonely nights
days of numbness
To amend
restore
everything lost
making you forget all sorrows
making the illusion real
and fly you
home
***
© Eclipse 2008 – 2011
Shared on Theme Thursday
and One Shot Wednesday
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Love may hurt.. but it certainly knows how to heal too! And then we forget all about the hurt… isn’t that awesome!!!
Beautiful verses… cast into a lovely shape too…
You have painted my day with a very beautiful, meaningful and surely reproducible-in-print poem of exquisite sensitivity and insight. Thank you! Thank you!
Oh, the power of love!
just beautiful…i found a lump in my throat reading such tenderness
Thank you very much Cynthia, I’m flattered….
Lovely poem. I so liked the feel.
I liked the structure also.
Thank you Ankit
This poem is beautiful on many levels, including the shape of it. Wonderful description of love.
Thank you for your visit Raven and for the nice comment
I’ve visited your site and I’ve discovered a lot of great poetry there…. 🙂
“you have painted my days with flowers”
a line worthy of a poet. nice.
Thank you California Girl, you’re too kind
This is utterly lovely.
Thanks for reading Kim 🙂
To open yourself to a beautiful self-knowledge and then to share it—showering it upon another—lovely poem.
Thank you for the kind comment dustus….
The poetry looked like overlapping petals 🙂
Lovely lines ..`
🙂
what a gorgeous read…thanks for taking us into that heart to find restoration…glad you joined us at one stop as well…
thank you very much brian
Very lovely indeed!
Very beautiful indeed. I love the flower analogy here.
Thank you very much for your kind comment, honeyhaiku
Now that is the essence of making love. If it happens to you once, then you have been truly blessed.
Indeed Sam….Thanks for reading
very hopeful. i love how they each help to heal the other. lovely!
🙂
Thank you Dani