From the Pocket of a Dream

*A Dedication To The Knight*

There is one secret wish in my heart
To explore
the darkest corner of your mind
To turn it
into words into the drops
drained from my black ink
To make
your memories alive
upon the pages of the whitest paper
on the canvas of knowledge
To awake
an ancient thought
captured inside your infinity
An answer
that still sleeps behind the hidden gate
of your gaze

© Eclipse 2008 – 2011

Shared on One Stop Poetry


10 comments on “*A Dedication To The Knight*

  1. rosemarymonteith
    March 20, 2011

    Really enjoyed this

  2. Helena
    March 20, 2011

    Bravo! The accompanying picture fitted beautifully.

  3. marciento
    March 19, 2011

    This poem is really beautiful

  4. JL Dodge
    March 19, 2011

    really great poem !! I too liked the line
    “To turn it
    into words into the drops
    drained from my black ink”

    Well done !

  5. dani
    March 18, 2011

    i absolutely LOVE this! very nice from the title to the last word. i really like the imagery of ~

    “To turn it
    into words into the drops
    drained from my black ink”

    wonderful! ♥

  6. RepressedSoul
    March 18, 2011

    wow, I like how you really got under his skin!

  7. brian
    March 18, 2011

    hot. i like…your poem evoke the feelings i have when looking at things…wanting to take a bit of its essence and put it into words…nice take!

  8. Pen
    March 18, 2011

    Very good write. I have so often felt that I wanted to know what was in the mind of people in paintings and sculpture. You have put this beautifully.

  9. hpicasso
    March 18, 2011

    a beautiful notion you have penned

    Peace, hp

  10. Sue Dreamwalker
    March 18, 2011

    you words always provoke thought Eclipse.. “” to awake an ancient thought””…. yes well many thoughts will start to awaken my dear friend.. and many will contain that ancient knowledge.. And the hidden Gate!.. well in my world it is just opening and the truth will soon pour through it..lets hope we can cope with the knowledge it herards in..
    Love and Blessings my dear friend… x

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