*Tide*

If you hear them again
the steps in your corridor
just a second before the dawn
you will know
that I am walking
once more
through the ancient dream of ours
while the rythm of the tide
vibrates so tirelessly
outside the imaginary window
of our home
But here
inside the reality
the black desert takes care of that desire
making it never come true
Now it weeps with the saddest echoe
A poem
written on the stone of the past
just appeared to be real
Then why the vision  from the distance
burns as a bonfire
why it still glows as a red hot iron
squandering the very last breath
trying to exist a little bit more
just to be turned to ashes
Answer me now
is that just a bad dream
or has that nightmare an end
leading us to a fairytale
to the secret garden
where all yet unknown flowers still await
to be discovered
by the hunger from our hearts

***

© Eclipse 2008 – 2011

Shared on  March Challenge
and Poets Rally

~ by Eclipse on March 24, 2011.

34 Responses to “*Tide*”

  1. lovely to read the magic and mystery of discovery and secrets

  2. Such hints of sensuality. Beautiful poem.

  3. Little, precious fairytale … dreamy writing!

  4. wonderful piece, thank you so much for writing.

  5. beautifully, love the ending! nicely written as always.

  6. “But here
    inside the reality
    the black desert takes care of that desire
    making it never come true”

    There you go again! Something I’ve always loved- the juxtaposition!

  7. beautiful. you captured the pain, sadness gloriously. splendid poem.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/03/16/magic/

  8. how is your day?

    please find time visiting poets who were here for you but you did not visit yet..

    Thanks..

    have fun. 🙂

  9. a spooky touch to this swell poem 🙂 liked it.

    Here’s My Poetry For The Rally

  10. In dreams, we search for truth, beautiful or horrible. No guarantee of a happy ending.

  11. The lost love… The impossible love… The desperate love… simply becomes a haunting fantasy… Beautiful poem Eclipse.

  12. The Blossoms of Love as the petals unfold from the thorns… Wishing you a Fairy tale Garden of Love and Delight.. 🙂

  13. A supernatural beautiful post…

    Dreaming!

  14. Very beautiful eloquent. Right up my fantasy alley. Much appreaciated.

    ~Ms. Queenly

  15. I love the ancient rhythm. Lovely.

  16. ” … fairytale
    to the secret garden
    and
    … all yet unknown flowers still await
    to be discovered
    by the hunger from our hearts.”

    Nice ending ~~

  17. magical

  18. fairytale and secret garden…i like…

  19. we will always live between dreams and reality,

    lovely delivery of your message.
    Happy Rally.

  20. very good i like this peace . from kevin

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