EclipseOfTheMoon

From the Pocket of a Dream

*Hollow*

Only
Never
Always
Forever

Words
with power
of giving life

Words
empty
with no meaning

A moment of flight
An eternity of downfall

A rise into a false hope
taken by the fire of a riddle
and by silence of a strange reason

One soul
tired of begging
leaves the daylight
to stay in a hollow night
to remain inside the dream

The smile stays on
embraced by an illusion

***
© Eclipse 2008 – 2011

Shared on One Single Impression
Poets United
and Jingle Poetry

Image by Salvador Dali

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10 comments on “*Hollow*

  1. Sue Dreamwalker
    March 30, 2011

    Your graphic so illustrated your words too.. As always Eclipse your words hold their own Magic for all to feel ..

  2. Martin
    March 30, 2011

    You captured it so well.

  3. Jingle
    March 29, 2011

    brilliant,
    keep it up.

    you got soaring talent ..come from one single impression,

    share one poem with poetry potluck today,
    bless you.

  4. Ramesh Sood
    March 29, 2011

    Very beautiful.. I liked it indeed..

  5. ladynimue
    March 29, 2011

    From shadows
    the soul shines,
    smiles,killing
    the darkness
    inside..
    You hear cries ?
    Check again
    the once loved
    ties,now they
    crawl away,
    touched by
    your lies.
    But the soul
    smiles,
    shines,
    finally
    I will
    see light.

    Random ideas inspired by your poem .. Hope you do not mind..
    Wonderful lines Eclipse .. Love every single one .. specially the last two !

    • eclipseofthemoon
      March 29, 2011

      Of course I don’t mind Lady 🙂 I’m flattered and I like your lines as well

  6. eclipseofthemoon
    March 29, 2011

    Wow….Thanks Sam 🙂

  7. Sam373
    March 29, 2011

    WoW!

    You fascinate me. Your words speak of frustration
    But your gift speaks of conquest.
    For this is the arena of life
    And if not for your words writ
    I would not have cause to rise
    For a reason my love
    YOU LIVE!

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