*Hollow*
Only
Never
Always
Forever
Words
with power
of giving life
Words
empty
with no meaning
A moment of flight
An eternity of downfall
A rise into a false hope
taken by the fire of a riddle
and by silence of a strange reason
One soul
tired of begging
leaves the daylight
to stay in a hollow night
to remain inside the dream
The smile stays on
embraced by an illusion
***
© Eclipse 2008 – 2011
Shared on One Single Impression
Poets United
and Jingle Poetry
Image by Salvador Dali
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10 comments on “*Hollow*”
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Your graphic so illustrated your words too.. As always Eclipse your words hold their own Magic for all to feel ..
You captured it so well.
Thanks for stopping by Martin
brilliant,
keep it up.
you got soaring talent ..come from one single impression,
share one poem with poetry potluck today,
bless you.
Thank you Jingle, you’re too kind 🙂
Very beautiful.. I liked it indeed..
From shadows
the soul shines,
smiles,killing
the darkness
inside..
You hear cries ?
Check again
the once loved
ties,now they
crawl away,
touched by
your lies.
But the soul
smiles,
shines,
finally
I will
see light.
Random ideas inspired by your poem .. Hope you do not mind..
Wonderful lines Eclipse .. Love every single one .. specially the last two !
Of course I don’t mind Lady 🙂 I’m flattered and I like your lines as well
Wow….Thanks Sam 🙂
WoW!
You fascinate me. Your words speak of frustration
But your gift speaks of conquest.
For this is the arena of life
And if not for your words writ
I would not have cause to rise
For a reason my love
YOU LIVE!