*Forged In Fire*

A missing part
unknown during my years
but here
so painfully here

hanging in the air
floating through my darkness

behind my closed eyes
unbearable hole inside the soul
in the place that love should be

A real meaning
forging the true senses
to prove them
in the fire of plagues

chosen for the mission
made it without dying

No fear
of closing my eyes again
the hole of my heart is filled
you live there in stead of confusions

That is your new home forever


© Eclipse 2008 – 2011

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~ by Eclipse on March 31, 2011.

9 Responses to “*Forged In Fire*”

  1. Yes, every word is true, but I do not mind, as long we are true to each other as soul mates … Love you poetry, cat.

  2. A poem of that empty void many feel- so glad it was filled with a new kind of ‘Fire’ … Have a great Weekend my Friend .. ~Dreamwalker~

  3. Very nicely done.

  4. This is a sad, unfulfilling kind of love, isn’t it?

  5. A sad, powerful, passionate poem. Nice write.

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