*The Saddest Memory*
“G” is for Grief
I hope
that somewhere in this cold world
there is a cure
against the evil darkness
You and I
as the autumn leaves
maybe are falling
to the ground
I’ve tried to find the key
of the black cover that holds you
in its cold embrace
I failed
A love was born
among the strong words
inviting me into the magic world
We were two strangers
suited so well together
yet
our love was not enough
The weakness was larger
it never won over fears
In stead of staying alive
together
we’ve chosen to slowly die
Alone
You’ve become a dead poet
but for me still immortal
The one from my dream
I was prepared to haunt you forever
So I guess we’ll be good darling
I’ll find you again
In another life
***
© Eclipse 2008 – 2011
Advertisements
Oh my! Those words have genuinely stirred me.
this is haunting poetry!! Great Stuff
Again and again… I am captured by your words…
I can just say the same when I read your poems 🙂
I like the lull and flow. Comforting.
Thank you tara
“” I was prepared to Haunt you forever””….
Your poetry and words deffinately haunt me.. never have I been touched by words such as within your poems Eclipse.. I always come back for more…
Hugs Dreamwalker
Thanks Dreamwalker…your flattering comments!.. 🙂
Provoking, and somewhat familiar.
Yes, the world is full with sad memories…Thank you for reading torquethis.
Beautiful poem with great imagery! loved it.
Thanks Dream Trekker. 🙂
Eclipse, I think you draw the finest imageries I’ve seen. Make the poem come alive through your words 🙂 Very beautiful!
Rally Week 41 – My Poetry
Thank you very much Vinay, I’m glad you liked it 🙂
Beautiful poem ….So powerful is your emotions which we can feel from this poem Why it was not able to override the fears I wonder?
But as you say let us hope ….
“So I guess we’ll be good darling
I’ll find you again
In another life”
Oh that is a long and not so happy story…The hope wins at the end 🙂 Thank you Rashmi
G is also for good.
…so it is…. 🙂
You are one fantastic poet I have come across Poet’s Rally.. and I’m glad I did. U echo all of what I & a friend feel and go through.. for reasons similar & different each.. Thanks for sharing.
I am from ~
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/04/02/the-alliterated-odes-the-alliterated-symphonies-of-the-mind/
The pleasure is all mine Purvi, I really love the special way of your writing 🙂
Like someone before me said, the intensity of the emotions kind of scared me. Beautifully written:)
It wasn’t meant to be scarry… :)I understand what you mean, Alethea, thanks for stopping by
This is a very strong and powerful piece of literature. Well written.
Thank you Ewan.
It is hard not to surrender to the passions. Nicely written!
🙂 Thank you.
A poem at the beginning so dark and at the end with a bright shining light of hope..
A very strong imagery that your piece creates..
Terrific!
Alcina
Thank you for stopping by and your kind comment Alcina
Possessiveness? – perhaps but not wrongly so – in the sense that in all lives we all belong… beautiful poem
Thank you very much Paul…you’ve just inspired me to write more in the same tunes…. 🙂
Powerful. For some reason, the passion in this poem scared me. The passion, the possessiveness. It was scary.
Possessiveness…in the last words you mean?…well … not easy to let him go 🙂
Thank you very much for reading Neeraja
I like the way you reach out and touch immortality here, a well crafted piece!!
oh thank you andy 🙂
Powerful. I felt such profoundness.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/04/07/lovers-we-are-now/
stunning and haunting.
die beautifully,
live wisely..
thanks for sharing..
Thanks for the visit Jingle….I’ll use your words as a good advice 🙂
slowly die alone…gave me so much chills….this is def a sad tale…though nicely written
…it’s nice though, that all that lies behind now 🙂
Thank you very much for your kind comment Brian
another life, same instances? broken hopes? emmm- leaves me thinking if it is good haha! nice write! my thursday~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/let-it-be-it/
Sad poem but wow! the way you compose this was very well created. Your blog is awesome! Thanks for allowing me to take a look at your poetry.
Many thanks John and you’are welcome anytime
“In stead of staying alive
together
we’ve chosen to slowly die
Alone”
And
the last stanza.
ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! 🙂
Thank you very much Mihir