From the Pocket of a Dream

*His Eyes*

Never close enough
His eyes as blue as deep lakes
Shadows giving light


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3 comments on “*His Eyes*

  1. Mm I feel that one. Nice! I know someone with eyes as blue…!

  2. Becca Givens
    April 20, 2011

    the eyes are windows to the soul … very nicely done!

  3. Donna
    April 20, 2011

    An appropriate topic, “Shadow” given your Title: A Broken World: Darkness & Light. Saddens me that an absolute term is used “Never”, yet provides hope in that the imagery is beautiful and that shadow is used positively as casting light instead of darkness.

    Beautifully written and flows with spirit. All my best for the present and the future!

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