*The Strings of Denial*

I could
see beyond the fog of emotions

See the other side
behind the haze of senses

I could
escape the shackles

still rapes the mind
with the tunes of insanity making a simphony

is a lunatic
playing on the strings of denial
whispering from the walls of a wild illusion

but never close enough

yet far away

Too far to catch on the words within your verse
Too far to seize the lines in your poem

from my eyes
disappear in the darkness of my black hole

never to be heared
The bottom is to deep to be reached


© Eclipse 2008 – 2011

Prompted by One Single Impression
and We Write Poems

~ by Eclipse on April 20, 2011.

7 Responses to “*The Strings of Denial*”

  1. Love this so deep! Also thank you so much for the song playing on your profile, I love finding new music 🙂

  2. I love the symbolism of this post. The layout is very pleasant to read.

  3. Deeply emotional. Can feel it.

  4. Eclipse… I always find my self in one of your poems, your words are a mirror to my soul… Great as always.

  5. … so sad … so tru … so beautifully written …thanks for sharing. Love, cat.

  6. Fear… the topic of my last one, too. I felt the depth of raw emotion here.

  7. You
    but never close enough
    yet far away …

    so familiar! Loved the poem!

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