*The Eternal Band*

The Eternal Band

To wait is a fear.
Voices in the corridor
knocking, breathing. Drear.

Sounds in the darkness
entering the door of soul.
Unease and distress.

I dug my way out
from the hole there light shined through.
Nothing more to doubt.

I reached for a hand
in a wish to miss the fall
The eternal band.

***

~ by Eclipse on April 28, 2011.

don’t we all reach out for that hand… yet it can lift us up and drops us harder than we fell before..

Sam said this on May 5, 2011 at 9:38 am | Reply
Beautiful, full of pain and dread

rosemarymonteith said this on May 4, 2011 at 1:31 pm | Reply
Here’s to making it this far, congratulations! I have an award for you!!

Elizabeth Mueller said this on May 3, 2011 at 5:35 am | Reply
- Many thanks Elizabeth, that is so cute of you.
  Congratulations to you too, it was great work out there, and it was fun 🙂
  
  eclipseofthemoon said this on May 3, 2011 at 9:55 am | Reply
The eternal band is a magnificent idea.
I really like this poem

Artswebshow said this on May 3, 2011 at 1:02 am | Reply
- Thank you very much Richard
  
  eclipseofthemoon said this on May 3, 2011 at 9:53 am | Reply
mostly waiting is fear and pain. so true.

trisha said this on April 29, 2011 at 4:59 pm | Reply
- Unfortunatelly it is…
  thanks for reading Trisha
  
  eclipseofthemoon said this on May 3, 2011 at 9:52 am | Reply
a dark poem, but still great.
Great meeting you through the A-Z 🙂

nutschell
http://www.thewritingnut.com

Nutschell said this on April 28, 2011 at 11:46 pm | Reply
- Thank you Nutschell, it´s nice to meet you too
  
  eclipseofthemoon said this on May 3, 2011 at 9:51 am | Reply