From the Pocket of a Dream
After the years of shadows,
after centuries of silence,
after an eternity of absence…
You. Reborn. Created again.
Just in time for the meeting through a dream.
© Eclipse 2008 – 2011
Shared on Poets Rally
So beautiful and captivating.
L O V E it!!! Well done ~~
Simple and eloquent
As it happens open your heart to the possibilities.
i love the piece!! short but brilliant 🙂
Nice read! Liked the concept of re-birth after such a long time!
Ps hope you can read as my keyboard seems to to stick and miss letters out at times.. Dreamwalker
A very insightful few lines Eclipse.. Rebirthing… I wonder just how my earth years I shall be absent before my next Rebirth? But if I had my way I would remain in the Silence for more than a Few Centuries. Or maybe I would perhaps just ‘Dream’ living in my own Creation.. Yes Maybe that would be what I would chose.. LOL.. To be reborn within this realm… Is a hard lesson to chose to go through time after time.. But we must keep on loving it to be Reborn..
Love and Blessings.. A debate I could go on about lol… My friend and I made a pact . When she passed away a few yrs back.. She said Sue, if we should meet up Spirit side and I say I want to come here again.. Just hit me on the head with a Big Shovel.. lol… And remind me what I went through this time around :-)… lol…. I said Ditto!….
Enjoy your weekend Eclipse… 🙂
Beautiful =) I wish I could write so well!
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I don’t feel good to be noticed that I did not count your votes, you may not feel good to think that your votes are not appearing, it is a misunderstanding.
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it takes me more than 10 hours to finish everything, I counted every single vote.
Every moment of silence will appear more powerful in the future. I can imagine how centuries of silence would have appeared in a dream 🙂
this is nice like being away groom home or a lo e then finding them again
Really well composed.
Rebirth is an all time topic to ponder over.
short and powerful……..it gives so much to think about
I can’t help but wonder what inspired this poem. It is simple yet complex in its meaning. I enjoyed it very much. So much so I read it over and over!
We all need it sometimes, to be reborn and follow new dreams, it’s amazing experience, at least to me … Nice, little poem, treasure!
right in time,
love the whole piece, well done.
Like this Eclipse
There’s a solemn tone when in reality I read it thinking about love… And that contrast is what I liked most!
Loved it! Specially the last two lines. Reminds me of a poem I wrote on the same theme. 🙂
about reincarnation…Different 🙂 Enjoy the rally!
This is indeed the shortest for you! Have a great day!
Thanks Doug… well five line poetry use to be pretty short 🙂
Short but very potent.
I enjoyed this and the message
Thank you Richard
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