*Morning*

Morning

A new dawn rising
My window
bathes in sunlight
Outside
the wind blows
in tact with oblivion
Yesterday
it hid
the grains of pain
within my broken sand glass
Taken away
by a magical hand
Forgotten
Deleted
from the pages
of my blue remembrance
Replaced
with a strange impression
Happiness?
A new dawn rising
Morning
on the shoulder of love
The beginning
of my universe

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~ by Eclipse on May 23, 2011.

Posted in Poetry
Tags: Blue Monday, Dawn, Happiness, Life, Love, Universe

16 Responses to “Morning”

A beaufiful flowing poem. To question anything, not just happiness, is human nature.

Andy McDonald said this on May 28, 2011 at 12:44 am | Reply
Seems someone found love, perhaps a new found joy. Right to question but don’t let it hesitate you from reaching the possible happiness before ya. It was a pleasure, and have a good life.

shoelessboywonder said this on May 25, 2011 at 7:56 pm | Reply
I love how you question “Happiness ???”, this is true Eclipse, it is always questionable.

Sam said this on May 25, 2011 at 8:40 am | Reply
enjoy the sunshine on your face today.

Jingle said this on May 25, 2011 at 8:35 am | Reply
Beautiful prose, it flows as words ought to flow.
Fabulous writing.

Daydreamertoo said this on May 24, 2011 at 1:25 pm | Reply
The look and feel of your blog, the brilliance of your poem, the genius of you. Perfect combination.

Midnight Orgasm said this on May 24, 2011 at 9:34 am | Reply
Eclipse, I love this!

There’s something magical about dawn…starting afresh, anew.

“A new dawn rising
Morning
on the shoulder of love
The beginning
of my universe”…simply beautiful.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.

Andy said this on May 24, 2011 at 5:11 am | Reply
It is with grace, we can start fresh each day! We can turn the tide any time ~~

Becca Givens said this on May 24, 2011 at 4:13 am | Reply
Some blissful moments simply happen – we don’t need to ask why – we can simply enjoy them : )

Martin said this on May 23, 2011 at 11:49 pm | Reply
a very positive note to my own morning 🙂 Thanks!

Misz μεταμόρφωσις said this on May 23, 2011 at 11:20 pm | Reply
I hope this new dawn will contain all the love to heal the grains of pain and to heal the broken sand glass … Lovely! Hopeful!

Broken Sparkles said this on May 23, 2011 at 10:24 pm | Reply
I love the hope expressed in this poem. The beginning of my universe is great and reminds us how we recreate ourselves each morning.

Molly @ Postcards from a Peaceful Divorce said this on May 23, 2011 at 7:52 pm | Reply
So lovely. Every morning is a fresh begining-we have a chance to change our outlook every day, so lucky is man!

BUTTERFLIES OF TIME said this on May 23, 2011 at 7:51 pm | Reply
morning is lovely,
Glad to see the rising sun.

Happy Potluck.

Jingle said this on May 23, 2011 at 6:50 pm | Reply
Glad you reposted this – excellent pice. “in tact with oblivion” is a great line. Love the whole poem!

Old Ollie said this on May 23, 2011 at 3:26 pm | Reply
I’m happiest when I haven’t figured out why … and I’m saddest when I don’t know why … Go figure, eh? Blessed be, Princess of the North … Love, cat.

cat said this on May 23, 2011 at 3:19 pm | Reply