*encrypted*
a hidden meaning
an encrypted message
the never ending circle
wondering why
and how
while time passes
the well known corridors of darkness
another anniversary
an illusion
or the request
selfish but final
a story with no regrets
no wish to let go of the knowledge
at the edge of sanity
there’s an offer
for you
to finally quench the thirst
if you love me
make me real
***
© Eclipse 2011
Written for One Shot Wednesday : Go Dark if You Dare!!!
EclipseOfTheMoon 
The last coupla lines left me totally numb …absolutely fantastic, my dear!! (sigh)
I think I am drowning in the depth of your words, Eclipse… haaaaalppp
…oh my… here I come to pull you out 🙂
Thank you dear Kavita
Eclipse, I love the mystery of this…”if you love me
make me real”…nice.
You’ve cast a spell on me with your words:-)
(Thank you for always commenting at my blog).
Those very words are the key of the whole thing I had in mind…
Thank you very much for your lovely comment Andy 🙂
Dark and mysterious! Lovely prose!
Thanks Daydreamer, I’ve just tried to stick to the topic 🙂
Beautiful, with a touch of a mysterious quality to it. It leaves me with wonder at the great words you wrote 🙂
Rx
🙂
Thanks dear Raven
this is the second dark poem that was on the edge of sanity.
You interject wondering and searching from the first line – nicely done
Many thanks for the visit and your kind comment Moondustwriter
Hugs
🙂
Hugs back….
ha. considering today is my anniversary that line struck me…if you love me make me real…i like that…love can do that…
It surely do,
thanks for reading Brian
happy anniversary (one more time)
…wishing you many more 🙂
A writing of complexity , I feel a loss and a regret of that which has passed and yet I sense the acceptance of the present.
You are correct in that your writing is encrypted , but encrypted in emotions
I love the way you have presented your post
Ian
…and I like your analysis here 🙂
Thank you Ian
Mindblowingly beautiful!!!!
I am completely drunk in the beauty of the words.. very well done..
Hugs xox
Thank you dear Olivia
Hugs back at you 🙂