From the Pocket of a Dream

*A Mistake*

A mistake.
Being left alone
while the gaze
behind the unknown scenery.
within an unsound crowd
among the unusual friends
calling on
into a strange ward,
into the hall of darkness.
A society
promoting the weird gathering
telling about the life
that belongs to the other side.
The unhappy one.

A mistake.
Being left alone
with my sizzling thoughts.
Alone with my thoughts
I’m in a bad company.


© Eclipse 2011

Shared on writter´s island

Image: Adam  by Emile-Antoaine Bourdelle


7 comments on “*A Mistake*

  1. giselzitrone
    June 11, 2011

    Sehr schöner Blog liebe Grüsse noch von mie Gislinde

  2. Sam
    May 31, 2011

    Oh Eclipse… so true, although being alone is something I cherish, yet at times I can be a bad company to myself…

  3. vivinfrance
    May 28, 2011

    Fascinating, and your last stanza is stunning.

  4. Daydreamertoo
    May 27, 2011

    Sometimes when we are alone with only our non-stop thoughts for company, we can get swamped by them. This portrays that so well.
    Very good prose.

  5. ladynimue
    May 27, 2011

    You talking of me 😉 ??
    Amazingly heartfelt ! 🙂

  6. aussieian2010
    May 26, 2011

    An intriguing post,your style leaves the mind betwixt and between the real and the unreal.

  7. Old Ollie
    May 26, 2011

    This really draws the reader in. You have a really cool style.

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