EclipseOfTheMoon

From the Pocket of a Dream

*Untouched*

You.
The one.
The only one that could ever read the most hidden pages of my impatient heart;

You,
who is able to create the sunshine out of the ugly greyness
and you, who can always turn my darkness into the red world of roses;

You,
who is the love I thought was lost,
playing the symphony of gorgeous words I always thirsted  within my old deaf world of the past.

To you
I gave my heart ages ago, way before I met you. Before we were born you were a part of this strange fantasy.

You should know:
even though I gave away some parts my soul, this love had always been saved. It waited in the silence of the hopeless dreams.

The love I am giving to you was never ever touched.

***

© Eclipse 2011

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11 comments on “*Untouched*

  1. Sue Dreamwalker
    June 7, 2011

    Love that spans the Aeons of time, I hope that we all can experience such love at least once in this or one life time… .. So much feeling and love is within this poem… I know that Love as powerful as this… transcends all time. ….. Sigh!!! 🙂

  2. Sam
    May 31, 2011

    what a beautiful poem Eclipse… Powerful words that do reflect ” The Love”…

  3. Broken Sparkles
    May 29, 2011

    may we all have such love somewhere waiting for us, safely hidden in someone’s beautiful soul!

  4. bluebell Books
    May 28, 2011

    very brilliant expression.
    well penned,

    Greetings:

    How are you?

    Check out our short story slam today,

    We love creativity, your contribution is invaulable to us.

    Cheers.
    Happy Saturday.

    xoxox

  5. Daydreamertoo
    May 28, 2011

    Sad and whimsical. I hope you get to have a love like this in your reality.

  6. vivienne Blake
    May 28, 2011

    I enjoyed the romance and the mood of this. Thank you.

  7. aussieian2010
    May 28, 2011

    You touch the very core of love , a love that spans many lives and ages and still at the going down of the sun that love is still alive
    Beautiful
    Ian

  8. Andy
    May 28, 2011

    My dear Eclipse,

    “even though I gave away some parts my soul, this love had always been saved. It waited in the silence of the hopeless dreams.

    The love I am giving to you was never ever touched”.

    You’ve captured the purity of this love so beautifully.

    People fall in and out of love like the changing of the seasons, but love never dies and it never disappoints. It’s we who fail love.

    I LOVE this! Thank you for another truly romantic piece.

  9. Artswebshow
    May 28, 2011

    Powerful words.
    You have a habit of doing that with your poetry.
    Excellent

  10. Raven
    May 27, 2011

    This is nothing more than BEAUTIFUL, my dear. I like the form…how lucky you are, how good to be you.

    I really like this tune, Amy Lee has a gift, the band Evanessance…haunting. Good choice.

    Smiles,
    Enjoy your weekend, Rx

  11. Martin
    May 27, 2011

    You express truly romantic feelings cast in strong words. The “silence of the hopeless dreams” – oh my!

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