*A Seashell Of Silvery Love*

Soaked
by the sunset
upon the humid sand
a seashell of silvery love
awaits a sound of steps coming

Before the dawning of a new day
the echo within  waves creates
a summer night simphony
for the intertwined
hands

***
© Eclipse 2011

Shared on Poetic Asides
and Poets Rally

Image: Seashell On Beach

 

~ by Eclipse on July 14, 2011.

24 Responses to “*A Seashell Of Silvery Love*”

  1. Very nice!

  2. Beautiful poem, yet simple

  3. I don’t know if it was the imagery or something else, but it seemed like this poem recreated the sounds of the ocean.

  4. Your poem is really beautiful. “A seashell of silvery love awaits the sound of steps coming,” just like the shell itself waits for the tide to come in. An interesting sense of how beautiful time can be spoken of.

  5. This is really beautiful; I have used shell imagery before in my poetry because it really does so much!

  6. oh this is just brilliant! brilliant indeed! love the emotion conveyed! a summer night symphony for the intertwined hands.

  7. a summer night symphony, that’s something to look around!

  8. Seashells, waves, sunset, summer … all very dear to me icons, expressions … Pretty summer poem!

  9. Your words create the image so well, of picking sea shells and listening to them, something held within childhood and even now I love collecting and washing shells in the ocean.. Arrgh to walk along the Beach.. and here the waves turn them over in the foaming froth on gravel bed.. 🙂

  10. I found myself traveling back to the seashore 🙂 Loved it!

  11. And I also changed my theme. Now we are same themed. 😉

  12. I loved both the stanzas and creating symphony from the tides was quite an imagination! Kudos for that. I know, I have been off the rallies lately but anyway, I am back again. Nice to see the new theme… its better. 😉

  13. Love the sound of seashells against my ears.

    Beautiful images of a summer night symphony. 🙂

  14. Absolutely gorgeous, second stanza blew me away wow

  15. And some 🙂
    more….

    ❤ you.

  16. Wonderful poem! I could hear the waves and the wondrous music they make in the dark. Beautiful!

  17. Magical, love the sounds in sea shells.

  18. I read it several times and found it to be soooo…magical!

  19. magical imagery, love sea side poems.

  20. I hear the image calling to me, and the poem is whispering of romance.
    smiles,
    Rx

  21. Sigh…..Such a beautiful picture painted with your words….Love and the sea is such a blessed combination.Love the feeling that this poems gives me 🙂

  22. Great free verse….

  23. Beautiful! Your poem going along with the tempting image makes me long to be under the sun, by the sea even more …

  24. I could hear the sound of sea and seashell.:smile:

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