EclipseOfTheMoon

From the Pocket of a Dream

*Upon The Bed Of Winter*

Like a frozen rose
upon the bed of winter
the past lying dead

***
© Eclipse 2011

Shared on Season’s Favorite Challenge by Broken Sparkles

Jingle PoetryThe Purple Treehouse

One Single Impression  and Haiku Heights

Image: Frozen Rose by UKTara

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14 comments on “*Upon The Bed Of Winter*

  1. The Purple
    December 23, 2011

    Excellent!
    Happy Holidays….
    I know you write stunning Haiku, welcome sharing with us,
    1 to 3 or more are welcome.
    no theme.
    Hope to see you in,
    Smiles!

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  3. Jamie Dedes
    July 26, 2011

    Altogether beautiful post – poem and photo. Nice work!

  4. Jingle Poetry
    July 26, 2011

    way to go.

    Greetings:

    Welcome sharing your poetry with us today.

    Poems that are old but need more attention, poems related to nature and life are welcome.

    Keep up the excellence.
    Hope to see you linked in and share.

    BEST!
    xoxox

  5. dragonkatet
    July 25, 2011

    This was quite well done. You did a terrific job with the haiku and the image was perfect.

  6. Daydreamertoo
    July 24, 2011

    My dream of having a united world is exactly that… a dream but..before too long mankind is going to realise they have to unite to survive. With our greed now, we are racing ourselves head on into our own extinction and, maybe that’s what we deserve, too. But, I can dream eh! 🙂

  7. liv2write2day
    July 23, 2011

    Beautiful entry for winter. Haunting.

  8. Jingle
    July 23, 2011

    well done Haiku.

  9. Kim Nelson
    July 23, 2011

    Your word choice conveys strong meaning. Haiku can be so effective when well-constructed. Nice work.

  10. Broken Sparkles
    July 23, 2011

    Very sweet little saying! Loving the rose image! Thanks for everything!

  11. Sue Dreamwalker
    July 23, 2011

    The past is best left in the depths of the deep freeze… But every now and again a Rose will emerge to warm even the coldest of winters days in the memory when held in the hand of love…

    An excellent depiction of the graphic with your simple and yet powerful statement here Eclipse… Enjoy the day- the moment! also,, Love Dreamwalker xoxox

  12. Daydreamertoo
    July 23, 2011

    Beautiful. Haiku is such a charming way to say so little but, mean so much!

  13. cocomino
    July 23, 2011

    What a cool shot and words.

  14. Andy
    July 23, 2011

    Powerful words, Eclipse and I love the stark contrast of the red against the gray…gives more depth and meaning.

    Nicely done, my friend!

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