EclipseOfTheMoon

From the Pocket of a Dream

*Drops Of Sapphire*

If I were a tree
I would understand
how it is
to stand against storms
and grow stronger
I would realize
what it means
to give away
without feeling the loss

I wouldn’t be fearing the nights
It is from darkness
I would draw my breath
The storms and misfortunes
would make my roots firm
I would give away my leaves
to the striking winds at fall
The missing parts of my green heart
wouldn’t ever bleed

If I were a tree
I would know
how to be grateful for the rain
for the sapphire drops
falling gently down on me
from his glance
Drenched with his love
I would become immune to fear
With no power to radiate
it would be
just a confused shadow
in my sunny forest

If I were a tree
he would be my river

***
© Eclipse 2011
Image by DesktopNexus

shared onTheme Thursday , Three Word Wednesday
and Romantic Friday Writers

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14 comments on “*Drops Of Sapphire*

  1. Broken Sparkles
    August 21, 2011

    Not a tree, but amazing story teller! Always a pleasure to be here! The emotions in your words always touch my soul in a very beautiful way! Thanks for sharing this!

  2. Sue Dreamwalker
    August 17, 2011

    Eclipse… This is Exquisitely Beautiful beyond any words I could use to describe.. except to Sigh with an inward pleasure..

  3. Raven
    August 16, 2011

    I love the graphic you chose…as inspirational as the poem. smiles, Rx

  4. Soul
    August 16, 2011

    Hello Eclipse,
    beautiful post and image,really nice.
    Also the background of your wp is very nice compliments for your graphic.
    Have a great week Eclipse
    Hug
    Soul.

  5. abichica
    August 16, 2011

    amazing.. i love it.. 😀

  6. Andy
    August 16, 2011

    Hello.
    Simply beautiful & your imagery is stunning.
    To be surrounded by love is truly wonderful.

    BTW, I didn’t see your link in Romantic Friday Writers for “Confused” on Fri 12. Did you forget to enter?
    The challenge for this upcoming week Fri 19 is “Hew Horizons”. The challenges for each week are posted a week in advance & linky usually opens on a Thursday & closes on Saturday. For more info, please visit Romantic Friday Writers. Click on Submissions and/or Challenges for more information. We’d love to have you enter/join us.

    Have a great week ahead & best wishes f or the future.

    • eclipseofthemoon
      August 16, 2011

      Thank you Andy, you are too kind.

      Well, I was a bit late with the post so it seems, there was a message saying “closed” below the links…Thank you for the invite, I’ll browse around RFW once again and hopefully catch up with you all in time 🙂

  7. Androgoth
    August 15, 2011

    This is a most wonderful piece of poetry
    my great friend and thank you for sharing
    the sweetness of your words…

    Be Well Eclipse

    Androgoth XXx

  8. TheMsLvh
    August 15, 2011

    Such a remarkable poem. Love it!

    You hit a soft spot for me.I live and thrive in trees.
    Here is one I recently wrote about Redwoods.
    http://themslvh.wordpress.com/2011/07/21/to-the-wood-%e2%80%93-a-sonnet/

  9. Daydreamertoo
    August 15, 2011

    I am so pleased you are not a tree but, this writing is exquisite. I too wish you all the love and happiness in the world. Beautiful prose.

  10. Reflections
    August 15, 2011

    Stunning piece. Love the mystic feel to your image, it carries well into the images you have wrapped into your words.

  11. Cat.
    August 15, 2011

    Read your poem over and over … it is so beautiful … wishing you all the love and the luck in the world. You are so gifted, I am happy for you, and wish you well. Love always, cat.

  12. Martin
    August 15, 2011

    I love the tree imagery in your poem : ) Exquisite to me. And the atmosphere of the image is utterly romantic.

  13. cocomino
    August 15, 2011

    Mysterious image and insipired sentence.:)

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