EclipseOfTheMoon

From the Pocket of a Dream

*Simply*

It
was
love at first letter
at first melody of one laughter
that echoed through the distance
so irresistibly sweet
for the heart

It
was
a call sent
from the times gone by
a message hidden within the bottle of life
floating upon the river
of dreams

 
It
was
love simply
At the very first breath
we just
knew

***

© Eclipse 2011

Shared for One Single Impression, Carry On Tuesday
and Sunday Scribblings
Image by Photobucket

***

Thank you so much  The Poetry Palace for this lovely diamond!

 

 

 

 

 

 

My nomination goes to  Peter for his extraordinary piece of art

 

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18 comments on “*Simply*

  1. Melanie Jan Bishop
    October 14, 2011

    Lovely take on the prompt. Well done

    Melanie

  2. demonsking19
    October 14, 2011

    nice 🙂 you are good at writing poems

  3. deadpoet88
    October 14, 2011

    Congratulations for the award. Your poem is so heartfelt, sometimes such things are just known, without any explanation or reason. Your words are very inspiring 🙂

  4. ms pie
    October 14, 2011

    we just knew… that is everything and more…

  5. keiths ramblings
    October 13, 2011

    This is simply beautiful. Thank you so much for contributing to Carry On Tuesday. Pieces like this make all worthwhile.

  6. Androgoth
    October 13, 2011

    In the sweetness of the moment
    it was a love that would last through
    time, into the depths of dreams, and
    far beyond into infinity…

    True Love Lasts a Lifetime

    Androgoth XXx

  7. Broken Sparkles
    October 12, 2011

    It’s all about love … when love is around everything is beautiful …

    I’m sorry for my absence lately, just too much to deal with! Thanks for your visits … And I loved the music – The Moon Sonata …

  8. Sabina Brave
    October 12, 2011

    I believe in love from 1st sight. Long time ago I experienced this. Alas it finished. Maybe because I was to young, and I was fighting instead of making compromises…
    Have a great day friend 🙂

  9. Rosemary Monteith
    October 12, 2011

    Love it Eclipse, beautifully put.

  10. Sue Dreamwalker
    October 11, 2011

    First congratulations on the award Eclipse.. you so deserve one with the beautiful poetry you write..
    And arrgh….. I ” Simply” love this poem.. and its like seeing a flower open and bloom.. Im so happy it was LOVE at the first letter..
    Long may it be captured and held within the vessel of life and keep you floating endlessly down the stream to emotional bliss for all of eternity
    Joy to you both.. ~Dreamwalker

  11. Harshad
    October 11, 2011

    Simply beautiful!

  12. Daydreamertoo
    October 11, 2011

    I keep signing up for you but never get any emails to tell me you’ve updated … strange!

  13. Daydreamertoo
    October 11, 2011

    Beautiful, it sounds to me as if your heart has come home. 😉

  14. cat.
    October 11, 2011

    I remember … this happenend to me too … way back when … this is ever so beautifully put, my lovely Eclipse … and congrats for the award … you so deserve it … thank you for speaking to my heart again and again. Love, cat.

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