*Jealousy*

There is
a strange power
an odd fuel
driving us
to judge
before the end

Turn around
and see
The road of lapse
is for the flawless

To sense
a bite in the heart
is just a proof of life

***

© Eclipse 2011

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Shared on It’s Thursday

~ by Eclipse on October 28, 2011.

10 Responses to “*Jealousy*”

  1. I agree with Sabina… your talent is unending 🙂

  2. I think when people say they don’t get jealous they’re not being honest with themselves. It’s a natural emotion. I admit, I’m extremely jealous; I’m naturally possessive and over-protective.I do try not to get jealous for the wrong reasons. Unfortunately for all of us, it’s a button that our significant others can push. However, it it reaches that stage, I probably don’t even care anymore.

  3. Very true Eclipse, jealousy is also a great distroyer

  4. Jealousy is a nasty feeling indeed, but sometimes it comes unannounced and unwanted and there is very little you can do, it takes more than a strong character to cut it! Your words are stunning as always!

  5. awesome

  6. awesome poem!!! love it.. 🙂

  7. I admire your ability of putting so many feelings and thoughts in short poem.
    By the way, I love watching stars on the sky.

  8. Thanks for the poem. There is a lot going in just a few words.

    Check out my blog post on jealousy at http://www.brianlamew.wordpress.com

  9. nice poem and nice back ground… 🙂

  10. Succinct. “There is a strange power an odd fuel driving us to judge
    before the end”. This one moved me.

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