EclipseOfTheMoon

From the Pocket of a Dream

*Heartless*

With a soul wrapped in twilight, her wings of perfume, spread for the last time, gently kissed the horizon.

Nothing to regret.
No one to blame.
No man’s memory to belong to.

Her bird eyes shone with diamonds dripping to the ground.

If she had a heart
it would be broken.

***

© Eclipse 2011

Image by vi.sualize.us

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28 comments on “*Heartless*

  1. tinkwelborn
    November 12, 2011

    crocodile tears! nice little piece here.
    makes me (the reader) want to know more about her.
    very arresting choice of descriptive words used.
    good job.

  2. Shauna
    November 11, 2011

    O. this is so my heart’s true poem. and the illustration is so
    making me lose my mind. a bird cage[i collect them] with
    rose petals swimming around and that dress & gloves …O.

  3. Nefarious X
    November 10, 2011

    This was well written. I enjoyed it and especially like the way you ended it. Great work.

  4. great ending line,

    please feel free to submit a random poem to our poetry picnic today, best!

  5. Andy
    November 8, 2011

    Hello.
    I am always treated to specialty whenever I visit here.
    Yes…it’s sad, but you pen it beautifully & your image rocks!

    Very nicely done, Eclipse!
    Thanks for sharing.

    A Weeping Rose

  6. Leo
    November 7, 2011

    love it, esp. that ending couplet. visual poetry…

    Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

  7. Hope
    November 7, 2011

    excellent!

  8. Adura Ojo
    November 6, 2011

    “No man’s memory to belong to.”

    Wow! Your poem speaks volumes, Eclipse. You describe heartless so well. Love the pic too.

  9. Kremo
    November 5, 2011

    Wonderful sentiment and picture to go with !!!

  10. Jacqui BB
    November 4, 2011

    Yes, excellent last line.

  11. Sabina Brave
    November 4, 2011

    Simply beautiful…

  12. Zoe
    November 4, 2011

    Excellent, really excellent. I love the last line – it hits hard. Beautifully executed.

  13. Kay Salady
    November 4, 2011

    “no man’s memory to belong to . . . if she had a heart, it would be broken” oh, this poem is wonderful!

  14. Susie Clevenger
    November 3, 2011

    such a lovely piece…nothing to regret…no one to blame…I wish it was so in my own life…great job!

  15. charlesmashburn
    November 3, 2011
  16. The Orange Tree
    November 3, 2011

    love it,

    vivid capture of a state of mind, in a way, that is true and could be heart breaking.

  17. C.L. Sostarich
    November 3, 2011

    Cold, clean, and final…..Her bird eyes shone with diamonds dripping to the ground…..a great line, very vivid.

  18. The Noiseless Cuckooclock
    November 3, 2011

    sad,

    very lovely done imagery.

  19. Sue Dreamwalker
    November 2, 2011

    ” Nothing to Regret and no one to blame” arrgh I wish! :-)… Great poetry as always my great friend..

  20. Daydreamertoo
    November 2, 2011

    Awww… very sad….don’t like seeing anyone’s heart broken…

    • Eclipse
      November 2, 2011

      It’s all good Daydreamer…she has no heart 🙂

  21. Mihir Vatsa
    November 2, 2011

    I love the end. Very cruel. 😀

  22. Gay Reiser Cannon
    November 2, 2011

    A personified vagary with wings of perfume…intoxicating and provocative.

  23. claudia
    November 2, 2011

    the images print themselves like stamps onto the reader..and what a wonderful last line..

  24. Kathy Bischoping
    November 2, 2011

    Super match of words to the disdainful image.

  25. brian miller
    November 2, 2011

    if she had a heart it would be broken..whew…nice close…really nice visuals throughout….

  26. Rosemary Monteith
    November 2, 2011

    like it eclipse

  27. Broken Sparkles
    November 2, 2011

    That sounds like you’ve been picking up inside my mind these days … therefore I kind of sympathize and love it, despite the sad melody between the lines!

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