From the Pocket of a Dream

*The Birth of a Breath*

In seeking.
Abandoned hopes.
No light.
Doubtful steps through the dark.

Fuzzy thoughts, taking root in heads.
Two lives. None heartbeat.
Unaware of each other. Dead.
in a sensing of the odd.

In shadows
through a whisper,
between the words of pain,
a breath is born.

If love cannot see,
they wish to remain
forever blind.


© Eclipse 2011

Shared on Carry On Tuesday
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Image by Victoria Frances


14 comments on “*The Birth of a Breath*

  1. Morning
    November 26, 2011



  2. Raven
    November 25, 2011

    Ones eyes and heart need always to be open in love for one another. This is a lovely poem Eclipse, as always 😀

  3. Broken Sparkles
    November 25, 2011

    I have faith in love! I hope she’ll see and not remain blind … this is how it supposed to be, but that’s only my opinion which often doesn’t match the real events! Lovely writing, again!

  4. keiths ramblings
    November 24, 2011

    Simply beautiful. Thank you so much for contributing to Carry On Tuesday

  5. Olive Tree
    November 24, 2011

    Love can see. There comes a point when it’s not blind, it can see, and it will find a way to bring the two together. This is wonderful, Eclipse. I always love how you use your words and put them together.

  6. Daydreamertoo
    November 24, 2011

    And….. never forget… where there is life… there is always Hope.

  7. Arjun Sharma
    November 24, 2011


  8. Janet
    November 24, 2011


  9. Sue Dreamwalker
    November 23, 2011

    We should never abandon hope, not while ever we breathe..

    Another excellent poem my dearest Eclipse.. With love and Many thanks for dropping by..
    Dreamwalker x

  10. abichica
    November 23, 2011

    amazing!! 😀

  11. Benona Louise
    November 23, 2011

    Beautifull poetry! Love it.
    ‘Love is like the wind.You don’t see it but you feel it!’
    Sometimes it helps to dreams. 🙂

  12. David Francis Barker
    November 23, 2011

    Lovely and delicate.

  13. Scribbling Gal
    November 23, 2011

    What beauty 🙂 Your poetry is making me fall with it each day and the last para….pure magic 🙂
    Loved it 🙂

  14. Rosemary Monteith
    November 23, 2011

    Lovely Eclipse

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