From the Pocket of a Dream


His lips stood mute and his eyes were inexpressive
Nothing she once knew was there
The rain kept washing away the silence between them
Nothing to remember
The day became nameless


© Eclipse 2012
Image by deviant art


4 comments on “*Nameless*

  1. Martin
    April 25, 2012

    Blessed be the rain that washes away the silence.

  2. Broken Sparkles
    April 19, 2012

    A masterpiece! Really love it! Short but full of emotions and events!

  3. Sue Dreamwalker
    April 19, 2012

    Sad when we find nothing to say any more… Very discriptive poem which got its message home like the driving rain…. xx

  4. Sabina Brave
    April 19, 2012

    It’s beautiful… althought sad.

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